Hall of Fame

We will use this hall of fame to publish the writing of our hardworking Camelford children. We hope you enjoy reading their writing.

Year 5 Harry Potter stories

Year 5 have been writing about Harry Potter. They listened to the tale of the three brothers and then they watched the short flim clip. They then wrote their stories based on this. Look out for powerful adjectives, vaired sentence construction and punctuation. Have a read of their stories below. We hope you enjoy them. 

File icon: docx adam [docx 11KB] Click to download
File icon: docx charlie [docx 11KB] Click to download
File icon: docx Chloe [docx 12KB] Click to download
File icon: docx ciaran [docx 13KB] Click to download
File icon: docx Daniel [docx 11KB] Click to download
File icon: docx Ellie [docx 47KB] Click to download
File icon: docx Emilia [docx 12KB] Click to download
File icon: docx Finley [docx 12KB] Click to download
File icon: docx grace [docx 11KB] Click to download
File icon: docx Hamish [docx 11KB] Click to download
File icon: docx kai [docx 12KB] Click to download
File icon: docx kiya [docx 69KB] Click to download
File icon: docx lacey [docx 11KB] Click to download
File icon: docx layla [docx 11KB] Click to download
File icon: docx Lucas! [docx 12KB] Click to download
File icon: docx Luke [docx 13KB] Click to download
File icon: docx matthew [docx 11KB] Click to download
File icon: docx Nate [docx 11KB] Click to download
File icon: docx QUINN [docx 11KB] Click to download
File icon: docx rebecca [docx 12KB] Click to download
File icon: docx ruby [docx 12KB] Click to download
File icon: docx sophie [docx 12KB] Click to download
File icon: docx the tale of the three brothers dean [docx 12KB] Click to download
File icon: docx tom [docx 14KB] Click to download

Year  5 writing

Year 3/4 letters to the Prime Minister!

Have a read of a sample of the Year 3/4 letters to the Prime Minister. Mrs Dingle has sent them off to the Prime Minister. I wonder if we will get a response?

Features of a letter

Can you spot any features of letter writing in Sophie's letter?

Persuasion

Can Year 3/4 children persuade the government to reduce the use of plastic? These letters certainly use a lot of persuasive techniques. Can you spot any?

Your thoughts

What do you think of our use of plastic in this country? Speak to the Year 3/4 children and let them know your views.